10 thoughts on “Clouded spring

  1. Well done! I was hoping everyone would not take the words literally. You captured what I was looking for. A lovely Tanka poem, my friend. ❤

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  2. A poetic comment

    Your tanka breathed relief
    Put a spring back into my step
    Up in the clouds I’m floating
    My mind so enchanted hoping
    Words can, and do transcend
    Lift me and others momentarily
    Open expose souls our souls
    Restore and boost our libido
    Put a bounce back into life

    Loved your tanka

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