she is meeting him
a cloud of doubt passed her brow
is he the right one
she remembers their first kiss
there’s a spring in her step now
Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka #Poetry Challenge # 25 – Clouds & Spring
Unclogging my mind…
she is meeting him
a cloud of doubt passed her brow
is he the right one
she remembers their first kiss
there’s a spring in her step now
Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka #Poetry Challenge # 25 – Clouds & Spring
Well done! I was hoping everyone would not take the words literally. You captured what I was looking for. A lovely Tanka poem, my friend. ❤
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Thanks for your kind words !!!
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Most welcome. 😀
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This made me smile, love your take on the prompt:)
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🙂
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Awesome.most sweet lines.
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Thanks ! Glad you liked it !!!
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A poetic comment
Your tanka breathed relief
Put a spring back into my step
Up in the clouds I’m floating
My mind so enchanted hoping
Words can, and do transcend
Lift me and others momentarily
Open expose souls our souls
Restore and boost our libido
Put a bounce back into life
Loved your tanka
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Wow…You are so good with words…
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