Thanks ! Innocence was exactly the emotion I wanted to come across.. worked around some other combinations of words… glad that the emotion reached you… !!!
Poetry carries an element of discovery, of unworded meanings, emotions etc., for both, the poet as well as reader. Glad to catch your emotion in this one. Once again, your poem did convey what you meant in a pretty compact, crisp manner. Keep it up! Good luck!
Loved this 🙂
Some people seem to think that sorry is a magical spell that makes everything okay, but after the fifth time you gotta ask yourself… is sorry enough?
Excellent Haiku. You’ve got to make up with that girl! 😀 ❤
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Yes, of course ! as soon as I learn the magic 🙂
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But, Sir… it’s been inside of you all this time! 😀
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If you say so… I guess the magic is called ‘sincerity’… will try to weave the magic… best wishes on your special day once again 🙂
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Have harry potter wand from me 😉
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Ha ha…thanks !!!
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🙂
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What a wish! So innocent!
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Thanks ! Innocence was exactly the emotion I wanted to come across.. worked around some other combinations of words… glad that the emotion reached you… !!!
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Poetry carries an element of discovery, of unworded meanings, emotions etc., for both, the poet as well as reader. Glad to catch your emotion in this one. Once again, your poem did convey what you meant in a pretty compact, crisp manner. Keep it up! Good luck!
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That is a wonderful commentary on the element of discovery in poetry… thanks for that and your wishes… I appreciate it… !!!
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You’re welcome! Interacting with you has been quite an interesting experience for me.
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🙂
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Loved this 🙂
Some people seem to think that sorry is a magical spell that makes everything okay, but after the fifth time you gotta ask yourself… is sorry enough?
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I agree… Specially if they don’t come across as sincere…
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