I don’t love you any more grant me a reprieve from your thoughts because I don’t love you any more Daily Prompt – Reprieve Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading... Related 12 thoughts on “I don’t love you any more” Add yours Is it possible to love and don’t love again? If yes, it means it was not love at the beginning but infatuation. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply I agree with what you say… the poem is meant to be sarcastic… the poet convinces himself that he is not in love anymore…but he cannot get her out of his mind… 🙂 LikeLiked by 2 people Reply Hmm. I love the poem’s premise, but if it’s the poet not able to stop thinking of the girl, then shouldn’t it read something like: “Grant me a reprieve from thoughts of you…” The way it reads, it’s as if she’s the one thinking of him. Sorry; I’m just trying to understand. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply I understand what you say, and I agree… it’s a tradeoff between readability and being contextually correct… somehow, your thoughts went better with the flow of the poem.. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Well, your wonderful blog is aptly named: “Playing with Words,” is it not? Thanks for your kind response. I enjoy your brilliant poems and only wish I could speak and write the Indian language as well as you can with English. All the best. xo LikeLiked by 1 person Thanks for your kind words… I find your poems brilliant as well… Interesting that you should allude to my Indian roots… I am deeply inspired by poetry in Hindi and Urdu… and I think it may reflect in my poems as well… All the best to you too… LikeLiked by 1 person Your poem makes me sad as that has happened to me in real life. Anand Bose from Kerala, LikeLiked by 1 person Reply I am sorry it happened to you…hope you have moved on… LikeLike Reply Thanks Buddy I still have not gotten over it. LikeLiked by 1 person Stay strong… LikeLike Gosh, to me, it sounds like the subject is asking the object to stop thinking of him / her, because the weight of those thoughts are a burden. I guess that’s one thing I love about haiku – it is so short and suggestive that it can be interpreted by the reader in a myriad of ways. Nice poem, nice blog. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Thanks… I agree with you… It’s up to the reader to interpret haiku the way they want… LikeLike Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email.