Breaking free

walking in
shadow of my guilt
waiting for
miracles
something ignites within me
wakes me up from trance

it whispers
let go of rancid
past, ’twas just
a ripple
in water, pin down the earth
and touch the sky

In response to The Sunday Whirl’s Wordle 303

5 thoughts on “Breaking free”

Roshni Ramanan says:

June 16, 2017 at 4:52 pm

This is wonderful XD

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1. hecblogger says:
  
  June 16, 2017 at 4:53 pm
  
  Thanks Roshni !!!
  
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Jael Sook says:

June 18, 2017 at 4:28 am

Oh WOW, this is outstanding!! And thanks for reminding me about Sunday Whirl wordles–love them!

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1. hecblogger says:
  
  June 18, 2017 at 11:59 am
  
  Thanks for your kind words… I thought your response to the wordle was great !!!
  
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  1. Jael Sook says:
    
    June 18, 2017 at 12:20 pm
    
    You’re most welcome–and I’m glad you really liked my wordle poem. It means a great deal that you would say so–thank you. Blessings to you 🙂
    
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