he loved the chase as
long as he was in the hunt
and then he gave up
she finds it hard to believe
that she was all but a game
Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge # 44 – #Haiku #Haibun or #Tanka: HUNT & FIND
Unclogging my mind…
he loved the chase as
long as he was in the hunt
and then he gave up
she finds it hard to believe
that she was all but a game
Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge # 44 – #Haiku #Haibun or #Tanka: HUNT & FIND
Wow! You’ve blown me away with this excellent Tanka. The ending is stupendous and reads like a story. ❤
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Thanks Colleen !!!
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