The chase

August 2, 2017August 2, 2017 ~ hecblogger

he loved the chase as
long as he was in the hunt
and then he gave up
she finds it hard to believe
that she was all but a game

https://colleenchesebro.com/2017/08/01/colleens-weekly-poetry-challenge-44-haiku-haibun-or-tanka-hunt-find/

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3 thoughts on “The chase”

Colleen Chesebro says:

August 3, 2017 at 4:28 am

Wow! You’ve blown me away with this excellent Tanka. The ending is stupendous and reads like a story. ❤

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1. hecblogger says:
  
  August 3, 2017 at 10:17 am
  
  Thanks Colleen !!!
  
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