he who left no stone
unturned to woo me lately
turned his back on me
Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge No. 48 #Haiku #Tanka #Haibun: STONE & TURN
Unclogging my mind…
he who left no stone
unturned to woo me lately
turned his back on me
Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge No. 48 #Haiku #Tanka #Haibun: STONE & TURN
The second line acquires a different aura without the comma after ‘unturned’. Loved it…
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Thanks Reena !!!
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Lovely!! Expressive lines written
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Thanks !!!
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Yes! Your Haiku is expressive and filled with emotions. Excellent!
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Thanks Colleen !!!
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Still with a hope, that time shall return, here I wait for him to turn, yet once again…
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Wow… great lines… thanks for the poetic comments…
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straight from the heart 😁
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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Superb – so much said with so little.
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Thanks Malini !!!
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