joy brimmeth over
nothing can flatten it now
time has matured it
my spirit is unbonded
can be stirred not shaken
Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge No. 52 ANNIVERSARY SPECIAL #Haiku #Tanka #Haibun: “SPIRIT & JOY”
Unclogging my mind…
joy brimmeth over
nothing can flatten it now
time has matured it
my spirit is unbonded
can be stirred not shaken
Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge No. 52 ANNIVERSARY SPECIAL #Haiku #Tanka #Haibun: “SPIRIT & JOY”
Wonderful! Stirred, not shaken.
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Thanks Reena !!!
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Very nice. Your last line does it for me. I love how you show that you are still fragile. 😀
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Thanks Colleen ! Last line is my favorite too… It’s also a take on James Bond’s (subtle hint in second last line) preference in spirits (Shaken, not stirred)…
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LOL! That’s fabulous! I love it! You are so clever… 😀
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:):) Thanks…
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I love what you have created from the prompt words. ❤
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Thanks for your kind words…
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