below them
the dark streets beckoned
with crimson
light, will their
parachutes deploy on time
he prayed and jumped out
In response to First Line Friday – November 24th, 2017
Unclogging my mind…
below them
the dark streets beckoned
with crimson
light, will their
parachutes deploy on time
he prayed and jumped out
In response to First Line Friday – November 24th, 2017
A lovely response to the prompt!
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Thanks ! Glad you liked it !!!
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I really did…and was pleased to see you also wrote a poem. I usually write a short story but a poem felt right.
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Your poem tells the story… I could imagine the scene you set out with your words…
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Great response to the prompt – we were both inspired with shadorma for this one 😉
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Thanks ! I really liked your take on the prompt !!!
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nice piece
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Thanks Gorman !!!
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nice use of the form with the twist at the end
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Thanks !!!
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