Persistent

December 15, 2017December 15, 2017 ~ hecblogger

her memories come
knocking at the broken door
don’t come in nor leave

Colleen’s Weekly Prompt – Bells & Past

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5 thoughts on “Persistent”

Colleen Chesebro says:

December 15, 2017 at 9:40 pm

Good senryu. I like the synonyms. Well done! ❤

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1. hecblogger says:
  
  December 15, 2017 at 9:42 pm
  
  Thanks Colleen !!!
  
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vivachange77 says:

December 16, 2017 at 9:44 pm

Great little story in your poem.

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1. hecblogger says:
  
  December 16, 2017 at 9:50 pm
  
  Thanks !!!
  
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