don’t make loneliness
an excuse for intrusion
on my privacy
In response to Saturday Mix – Lucky Dip, 10 March 2018
Unclogging my mind…
don’t make loneliness
an excuse for intrusion
on my privacy
In response to Saturday Mix – Lucky Dip, 10 March 2018
nice.
what if it’s not an excuse but a reason?
cheers.
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even then… no reason is a good enough excuse to intrude into my privacy…
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so be it
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☺☺☺
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Ooooh. Like hat you did here! Nice play on the poem’s message. Thanks for joining in the Saturday Mix
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Thanks Sarah !!!
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Those kind of people are annoying for sure.
Wolf should have stayed away, huh?
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Wolf was doomed one way or the other… Loneliness (ironically) does not come alone; it brings along with it neediness and possessiveness… Even if the family had initially accepted the wolf, he would have brought along his own downfall…
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I agree; maybe the neediness and possessiveness come first, causing the loneliness. I agree and yet I went in a very different direction.
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I love the alternate explanation you bring to the fable… there is a lot that people may hide within their walls… it may be hard when someone tries to break through their facade…
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nice! I liked it.
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Thanks Roshni !!!
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Yes Sir. Well written.
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Thanks !!!
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