False positive

mystery girl smiles
me pondering on my move
she looking past me

#Weekly Poetry Challenge – Week 108: Mystery & Pondering

8 thoughts on “False positive”

kiwinana says:

August 15, 2018 at 10:15 pm

Oh, nice one, but disappointing for the viewer. Thanks, have a great day.

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1. hecblogger says:
  
  August 15, 2018 at 10:47 pm
  
  Thanks ! you too have a nice day !!!
  
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Neha Sharma says:

August 19, 2018 at 6:48 pm

Uh oh! 🙂

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1. hecblogger says:
  
  August 19, 2018 at 6:52 pm
  
  🙂 🙂 🙂
  
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Sparkyjen says:

August 21, 2018 at 10:47 pm

I immediately smiled [also reflex up down head nod], when noticing the adept way the title of your poem made nice nice with the 3 lines to follow. Great knack!

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1. hecblogger says:
  
  August 22, 2018 at 9:24 pm
  
  Thanks… you do have a way with words… can picture you reading my poem…
  
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  1. Sparkyjen says:
    
    August 24, 2018 at 12:58 am
    
    💥
    
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