न टूटे तारा कोई

किस सिम्त देखूँ
सामने है ज़िन्दगी
और तू पीछे कहीं

वो न छोड़े मुझे
कैसी विडम्बना
तू अपनाये नहीं

कशमकश में हूँ
साँसें हैं मेरी या
कहीं गिरवी रखी

देखूँ आसमां तो
दुआ करे दिल मेरा
न टूटे तारा कोई

चुभता हूँ अब भी
आँखों में तेरी अमित
है यह कैसी नमी

In response to: Reena’s Exploration Challenge # 76

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  2. English translation –
    where do I look?
    life ahead
    you –left behind

    life refuses to let go
    you don’t let me in
    ironies unkind…

    mortgaged breaths
    challenge existence
    -what is really mine?

    it’s a vain hope, yet
    I wish for no more
    falling stars in the sky

    you blink – to get rid of me
    a particle – unseeing
    moisture in my eyes

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    1. Wonderful translation, Reena… my sister is a great fan of yours… according to her, your translations are always better than my original pieces…she had the same verdict for this translation too…

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  5. Pingback: Reena’s Exploration Challenge – 77 – Reena Saxena

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