आशा की कोई किरण छूती नहीं
किसी ज़ज़्बात की अनुभूति नहीं ।१।
नहीं अब उम्मीदों का बोझ मगर
शून्यता का भार कम चुनौती नहीं ।२।
गुज़रती थी हर राह तेरी ओर कभी
अब कोई सदा मुझको बुलाती नहीं ।३।
हो जाऊंगा एक रोज़ यूँ ही फ़ना अमित
होता था मैं चिराग, अब बाती नहीं ।४।
In response to: Reena’s Exploration Challenge # 82
Playing with words 
Wonderful! This has a musical rhythm – ‘geet’ more than a ‘ghazal’.
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yes… this is more ‘geet’ than ‘ghazal’… I guess the difference is in the use of more Hindi words than Urdu…
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bahut sundar. par udasi bhara.
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Thanks…
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English translation
elusive rays of hope – beyond my reach
blank emotions induce numbness
I shed the burden of hope long back
challenged by vacuums – all aimless
every path moved to you in the past
roads behind are silent – now voiceless
I will disintegrate, disappear some day
I was a lamp – now flameless
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oh, the beauty of your words
you leave me totally speechless
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Thank you so much!
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Read English translation in the Comments, if the language is unfamiliar…
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