The dance

delightfully disorienting dance
of her dark tresses in the wind
oh how they frolic and prance
delightfully disorienting dance
through clouds, moon I glance
how can I get out of my mind
delightfully disorienting dance
of her dark tresses in the wind

In response to: Reena’s Exploration Challenge # 103

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    1. The imagery is used commonly in Hindi poetry… “badli mein chand..”… regarding the format, yes, I have been experimenting with triolest of late… I like the rythm of the format…

      P.S. “getting out of mind” is connected to the next two lines… Can’t get the image out of the mind…

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