Think about it

one
blow
after
another
what do you reckon
that my heart is unbreakable

one
can
forgive
some mistakes
other transgressions
are damn near unpardonable

they
say
love can
conquer all
but these differences
between us are unbridgeable

In response to: Reena’s Exploration Challenge # 107

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      1. If you permit me to say this – I see a gradual shift in the mental process of your protagonist. I’ve deliberately changed the tone to optimistic in a few translations. The coach in me finds it worthwhile 🙂

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      2. Ha ha… that was not the mental process of the protagonist… rather the poet thinking he’s found a niche… believe it or not, there’s a genre of Hindi poetry called “nirashavad”… there was a time such poetry was in vogue even in Bollywood…

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